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Iridescent flickers of color
Float carelessly throughout the air
Resurfacing the wanders of the unknown
While exposing the passions within

The flames of the heathen blaze
Burst forth in sentimental dance
Exploding the tendencies of lacking thus
The infliction no longer dispersed

How I long of that fire
That flare of confession
Which leads and forgives and disappears
While leaving behind charred souls

My heart is made of coal
No longer of the nightly failings
But rather of the sky light sparks
That disappears behind rusted remarks

The spirits of the flourish
Tend to all my worthless cares
They bring up to the feelings of thus
The life circle...

Of the spirit blaze
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The spirit has a blaze with which can not equate to fire.

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~MurkyClouds Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this! I particularly like the phrase in second stanza, "The flames of the heathen blaze / Burst forth in sentimental dance", it creates a wonderful picture in the mind.
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Mood: Adoration ~Octavias101 Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
thank you! im glad you liked my visualization.
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~MurkyClouds Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^ np, it truly is a magnificent piece
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~Ruriko121 Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
You need to use this well-used talent for stories too! Write! Write! Write! or...type! Type! type! and upload on dA!
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~Octavias101 Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
lol! thank chu~ <3 -bows- i shall try... ^ ^'
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~Ruriko121 Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah, like last time chu gave up on es which was strongly dislikeable choice. But! You shall try again so i dont mind...
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~Octavias101 Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
awww. well im glad that my sister is looking out for me. <3
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~Ruriko121 Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww! Thanks for calling me sister! So sweet! Are you in the school newspaper?
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~Octavias101 Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
psh. i dont like journalism....tis bothersome...
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~Ruriko121 Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
ah soka...oh well, go for your dreams!
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