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Good evening to the cliff
The one that leers above
Challenging the leap
With rubbles that tumble down
With broken hearts that finally shatter

Good evening to the sky
The one that widens 'round
Surrounding with their spattered skies
With black blooded stains
With white flaring scorns of disdain

Good evening to the sea
The one that trembles below
Waving final sayings, tides of goodbyes
With swirls of treachery
With educing calls of end

Good evening to the world
The one that doesn't care if she drowns
Ignoring her sadness, her tears, her pain
With closed ears to cries
With hearts made of stone

Good evening
and Goodbye...
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READ BELOW PLZ!~



This isn't a poem about me committing suicide. It's just an expression of the sad loss of lives that have succumbed to the pressures of the world. A friend of mine had a friend who's sister had just recently ended her life. I immediately thought of my friend from last year who also ended her life, and I felt a sudden surge of sadness. The feeling reminded me almost of drowning, which I guess fits with the prompt for the group WritingtoLive. Eh, I feel that art is one of the ways to let out my emotions...anyways, you can hate it, you can love it, just don't mock this poor piece of work...

Lives aren't meant to be ended by the person's own doing. They still have a reason and a meaning to live. For me it's God's mission for me in this world. For others, it could be something else. Whatever the case, don't. Do not...close your emotions. Open them up to those around you.

The title image is by ~Jean-Genie. All credit goes to him.
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~AwkwardSnowball Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's pretty deep...and wow. I hope you know how good you are at poetry, cause damn, you explained everything so well.
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Mood: Affection ~Octavias101 Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
thanks chance. it means a lot to hear that from you. dove you bro~
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~AwkwardSnowball Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, you deserve it! And dove ya too -BEAR HUG- :D
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~Echoawesome Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wow
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