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Swirls of hue like memories
Taint the purity of the once white rose
Innocently prevailing a imagery
A image of the known

These rainbowish flurries of color
Paint a ignorant mindset once again
Covering over the corruption
With their technicolor ways

How my dreams fade
Dwelling beneath that rose of life
When they will ever bud again
I shall not be aware

A colorful life in a hand
That can be crushed by a simple grasp
Has a value of far more then such
Therefore resist the urge to touch

The technicolor rose of life.
A technicolor life is but a technicolor dream.

Image by *EliseEnchanted.
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roadkillKitten Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
I love the imagery and movement of this piece! The theme is repeated throughout but not in a way that beats you over the head. Very nicely done!
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Writer
thank you very much! im glad to hear of such wonderful feedback! ^^
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roadkillKitten Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Of course, it was my pleasure! That is, after all, why many of us are here. Lovely work!
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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roadkillKitten Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Hugs back!
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AngelWhisper19 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Tehe, well this goes into my favorites! Deal ^.^ u are talented, my friend!
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Writer
hehe ^^ thank chu~ <3 chu are too kind my friend!
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AngelWhisper19 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
<3
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Writer
<3 <3
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AngelWhisper19 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
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